People believe the best way to show care is by offering gifts.
Majority of people are of the opinion that the acceptable way to show care is by offering gifts, meanwhile others believe you can display affection is so many other better ways. Buying gifts signifies you truly care about the person and it also shows a sense of appreciation. However, there other better ways to extend love which is by praising and motivating the person. In my opinion, I believe buying tangible gifts is the best
One of the most important way to show care is by offering a gift for a job well done. These gifts may also come with an award or medals which the recipient can keep as a memorial. Companies , religious bodies and even schools give gifts, medals and awards for outstanding performances.
However, motivation and words of encouragement are another significant way of showing someone that you care. It is imperative to acknowledge a person's good deeds by verbal appreciation. When our children do something good we praise them so they can do even better, we do not buy them gifts all the time. Some companies appreciates their staff by displaying their pictures on the notice board for a specific period of time and everybody in the organisation gets to see it, which is a way of saying we love and appreciate you by the management
To conclude, many individuals believe it is essential to show care through offering of gifts because it is valuable and synonymous to how important the person is. However, certain demographics believe in showing love by motivation and praises. In my opinion, I believe in offering tangible gifts because the recipient gets to appreciate it more.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: appreciate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87636363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81531531361 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9684615943 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358826274984 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128486906314 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116455446533 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218814600898 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107354294259 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.