Nowadays, a lot of people buy things they do not need. You will notice that individuals who need more of good morals and positive attitudes channel their focus to very irrelevant things that would not contribute to their self development. For instance, teenagers in Nigeria involve themselves in fraud. This enables them defraud people in the country or abroad and tend to earn money illegally. After they must have acquired this illegal cash, you see them buying cars which wouldn’t add any self worth to their lives. One one hand, you can see a skilled hairstylist spending her earnings on frivolities like alcohol at night parties.
The reason all of these misplaced priorities are going on in the society today is because of lack of orientation. If we have a situation where parents play their role in directing their offsprings in the right part, I don’t think we would experience people buying what they don’t need. Furthermore, in situations where people don’t work to earn like in the case of kids that have wealthy parents, they usually don’t value money and tend to spend it in ways that show it.
First, I must say that this development is a very negative one for the individual. Making money requires discipline and you can’t spend money recklessly when you know it’s value. We need to spend our earnings wisely, use it on the necessary things and ensure that we make others know about this. Second, it is a negative development for the society. For example, you can’t have a successful country where the government spends money on things they don’t need. This will not do any good to that country, so the right thing to do is to delegate financial management of the society to professionals that can do the job.
In conclusion, I must say we need more positive developments in financial management.
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- Write an essay comparing or contrasting two pets 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
...dn’t add any self worth to their lives. One one hand, you can see a skilled hairstylist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91987179487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65210947449 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1162361062 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362856279837 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121660580354 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819181085934 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199469213073 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580126435525 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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