People generally know that the environment is important. However, mostindividuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is universally accepted that protecting the environment is perhaps the most significant issue, nations are dealing with. Unfortunately there are still some people who seem to be inconsiderate in conserving natural treasures. This inconsideration stems from two main reasons, for which two practical remedies are proposed.
Among all possible causes regarding lack of responsibility taken by some people, two are of paramount importance. Firstly, a number of individuals are not aware of the potential dangers they may encounter, in case they jeopardize the environment. As a prime example, we can refer to the grave disasters brought about by deforestation, which is the result of human ignorance in putting off the fires they have made in the jungles. However, a minority of people are not cognizant of the immense negative effect of this phenomenon, that is the malignant climate change. A further cause of this inattentiveness toward the nature is that environmental destructions take place gradually and mostly inconspicuous for a majority of people. For instance, those who leave their rubbish in the nature do not usually see what is going to happen in the next twenty years.
Turning to some of the workable measures to be taken so as to make those wrongdoers respect the nature, the foremost ones can be educating them and also imposing some fines on damaging the environment. Regarding the former solution, some educational TV programs should be produced to teach the whole society, and inform them about whatever can hurt or protect the natural resources. Moreover, there could be some plans to teach the pupils how precious our nature is and how much it can affect our lives. The other possible step, that is penalizing those who disrespect the nature, appears to be effective. This way people can directly feel how destroying the nature can directly influence their personal life, since they are charged for their irresponsibility.
To sum up, a salubrious nature is an integral part of our well-being. This being the case, the main reasons why some people do not take enough care about the environment should be confronted through taking some robust steps as enhancing social knowledge and setting some legal restrictions to preserve the nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... in the next twenty years. Turning to some of the workable measures to be taken so as to ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...me of the workable measures to be taken so as to make those wrongdoers respect the natur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21369863014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97936104411 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583561643836 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3203456098 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212909864985 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634533034298 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511733759445 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135998865122 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324024472123 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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