An environment plays a predominant role in the survival of human beings as well as a home for various living organisms. But, in this contemporary world, people are least responsible to save it because of two major reasons; primarily, they do not have enough time and secondly because of the negligence. It is not an insurmountable problem so the government has to take suitable steps to fix it, such as organizing awareness campaigns in every community and implicating strict rules on people who ban the rules.
Firstly, although people know that the environment is depleting day by day because of the harm produced by human actions, they do not be responsible for their actions. It is because of carelessness. To elaborate, pharmaceutical and automobile industrialists are aware of the fact that if they release harmful gases into the air and water, they get polluted resulting in environmental destruction. For example, the chemical industry in Hyderabad, India is releasing Carbon dioxide and Methane gases into the air in the evening just before the closing hours and, on an investigation, they tried to bribe the officials, which is against the law. To counter the problem, the higher authorities should impose strict fines on the industries or ban the company if they go against the rules of the government.
Secondly, as every individual is striving hard to meet the expectations of the family they do not have enough time to take care of the environment. They work hard in order to save money and live luxurious lives further. For instance, it is often seen in the USA, almost 60% of people work on weekends too to earn extra bucks for the family needs. To safeguard it, the government has to arrange public talks or seminars every once in 3 months to create awareness among individuals and tell them the importance of environment protection. Moreover, the local presidents should arrange Environment Day and see that their community people plant at least one plant yearly once.
In conclusion, lack of time and negligence are considered to be the causes of irresponsibility. To address this issue in order to ameliorate the disastrous circumstance of the environment, governments should instruct the individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11232876712 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08096048465 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550684931507 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3972117458 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189475287002 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586687888505 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434185519714 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11304354408 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259394998179 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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