People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Nowadays, living in a larger city has certain drawbacks which can lead to multiple issues such as an abundance of traffic, crime rate for the resident. On the other hand, some of these problems can be shadowed if you are dwelling in a town.
To begin with, the prime difficulty that people face in cities is the traffic. As the population of a city is significantly higher and every household has multiple vehicles that they can use at their disposal for going to work. As a result of this, the number of cars is increasing day by day on roads.
Furthermore, the cost of living in a big city is unmatchable as compared to a small village. For instance, a single bedroom in New York City can be easily priced at 2000 dollars while the same kind of apartment will cost around 1000 dollars in regional towns. So, a person should have to have a high paid job in order to afford such a high standard and expensive lifestyle.
On the other hand, the government should need to provide better career opportunities to the residents of these villages. Also, the local bodies need to develop the infrastructure to provide a fine standard of living in these towns. So, the government can entice the population to move to these municipalities after incorporating these tweaks.
Thus, with above in mind, there are various predicaments faced by city residents in-spite having better job opportunities. In addition, there are certain measures that a government needs to adapt to encourage people to relocate to small towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80717696443 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9562433075 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222726916034 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071695656574 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458429772608 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109483763006 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321968183116 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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