People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
The glitz and glamour of the city life may be enchanting for some but those who live in metropolises encounter a number of issues in their day to day life. In this essay I will discuss the main problems associated with this issue. Moreover, I completely agree that authorities should encourage the citizens to move to remote areas.
People living in modern day megacities face a number of problems everyday. Firstly, the daily commute to work is a nightmare for most. This is because many offices in large cities are located in a central business district ; usually the most expensive region of the city. Meanwhile, most workers live in far away suburbs where they can afford a decent-size dwelling. As a result, employees can end up spending as much as 2 hours travelling back and forth between their homes and offices every day, mostly stuck in traffic. Secondly, the congestion from millions of vehicles in the big cities causes severe pollution especially during winter months when most large cities are blanketed in thick smog. In fact, pollution levels in cities like New Delhi and Beijing was so high last year that the local governments had to impose restrictions on the number of vehicles running on the road, leading to even more disruption in the day-to-day lives of the office going residents.
Owing to these problems, some people have suggested that governments should motivate people to move to remote areas. I agree with this solution primarily because it solves the main issues faced by megacities. Often the reason for most offices to be built in city centres is the lack of talent in regional towns. If more people are relocated to these remote areas, the companies will be able to find talent there, thus moving their offices out of expensive real estate. This will have a knock on effect on other services too. For instance, once offices start cropping up in regional areas, cafes, pubs, schools and hospitals will follow too. Furthermore, as regional towns are much smallers, people will be able to live closer to their workplace, thus improving their overall quality of life. In fact, I still fondly remember the days when I used to work in a small regional town with a population of just 100,000. My workplace was so close to my apartment that I used to come home to have lunch everyday.
In conclusion, everyday problems in large cities vary from long commute times to unhealthy levels of pollution. I agree that authorities should encourage people to move to regional towns to alleviate this issue.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ay megacities face a number of problems everyday. Firstly, the daily commute to work is ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 973, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay lives of the office going residents. Owing to these problems, some people hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 996, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... that I used to come home to have lunch everyday. In conclusion, everyday problems in...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90442890443 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56278225635 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3124414946 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.19047619 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363837800566 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999400366573 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890331219819 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234636474095 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680544710536 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ay megacities face a number of problems everyday. Firstly, the daily commute to work is ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 973, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay lives of the office going residents. Owing to these problems, some people hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 996, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... that I used to come home to have lunch everyday. In conclusion, everyday problems in...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90442890443 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56278225635 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3124414946 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.19047619 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363837800566 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999400366573 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890331219819 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234636474095 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680544710536 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.