You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter1.Explain why you want to take time off work2.Give details of the amount of time you need3.Suggest how

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

1.Explain why you want to take time off work

2.Give details of the amount of time you need

3.Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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mso-fareast-font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;;color:black">Dear sir,&nbsp;<br>I am writing this to consider my leave for mostly 2 weeks. There is an urgent need of going to my hometown, as my mother met with an accident. She is unable to move her leg. Doctors suggested her for bedrest until she gets recovered. I think it takes some time. So, I need to rush to my place and could not be available for work during next two weeks. As there is no one to my mother except me I was bothered to move immediately. As soon as she recovers, I will be back to my work.<br>I have informed my situation to both of my teammates. They accepted to do my tasks during my absence. Also, told them to give a ring, if there is an urgency of my presence and to look after any issues which can be resolved only by me. At the same time, I will be checking my mails from home and will update you if you want me to work from home to consider my leave.&nbsp;&nbsp;<br>Thanking you. I here, by waiting for your response.&nbsp;<br>Your faithfully,&nbsp;<br>

Abc.&nbsp;</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Times New Roman&quot;,serif;mso-fareast-font-family:

&quot;Times New Roman&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...w Roman";color:black'>Dear sir, 
I am writing this to consider my le...
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Suggestion: , &nbsp
... your response. 
Your faithfully, 
Abc.  ^^^^^^
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22222222222 4.54256449028 137% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.20497409117 2.54303337028 323% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2557835687 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124166849244 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055412809519 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794128852765 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315797818297 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631595636594 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.5 8.71597938144 212% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.