People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, specific age-group is one of the key factor related to the habits of shopping. I agree to this statement, especially, people from the age between 25 to 50 are the ones who participate in shopping activities. In this essay, we will highlight some reasons related to this opinion with some relevant examples.
To start with, one major factor contribute to the shopping habits is necessity in different occasions. This is because there are certain standards which are set in the society. For example, children have to shop for their school functions, millennials have to go shopping for offices and business meetings and so on. This often becomes the necessity of people to shop for these purposes. Furthermore, in many festivals, the shopping areas become jam-packed because of the high footfall of families during those time.
Secondly, many people head towards shopping to follow latest trends. As many people encountered with latest magazines and articles which depicts what is out of fashion and new trends to follow. For instance, latest gadgets for youngsters, latest crockeries and cutleries for households and many more. Many people believe that this also value their status amongst the society. In addition to this, many youngsters get influenced by television actors; who occasionaly make fashion statements which is new in the market like certain type of cloths and sunglasses etc.
In conclusion, I contend that much of shopping habits are done by certain age group people because of lifestyle trends and for different occasions as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.276 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916961448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3624884466 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174335699905 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687689399117 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574480798806 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120866128057 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375004451231 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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