Some people say that art like painting, music, poetry can be made by everyone, whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many countries around the world, art still plays a crucial role in peoples’ lives. However, in some part of the society it is contended that arts such as painting, music and poetry should be performed by only those with special qualities. In my view, this should be done by everyone who wish to do so and in this essay I will discuss both sides of the arguments and support my side of argument.
Firstly, those who argue on the side that arts should be done by only those with special abilities, might believe that it deplicts perfection in their work. This is because they are innate with such skills and lacks inadequacy in their work. For example, a child who have astonishing skills of drawings and paintings from early days, in future he will perform these skills accurately. Furthermore, these people may contribute to the society by displaying their skills in museums or art galleries.
Nevertheless, In my view, arts should be practice by everyone as every individual has the right to equal exposure on all the subjects. In fact, it is solely depends on an individual what he/she wants to do in their life. Although, they might not possess the skills at an early age like those who are born with it. But with efficient amount of learning and practice, they also can become one of those who deemed to have special skills. To illustrate this, a person who dedicately practice learning skills such as painting or music, is likely to become successful in the same path. On the other hand, if such rights would have taken away from them because they do not have special abilities then it could be injustice to many part of the society.
In conclusion, although people who are innate with the skills of art should exercise them as they have the ability to outperform every time. However, in my view, everyone should have right to chose and perform arts equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...abilities then it could be injustice to many part of the society. In conclusion, altho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46331652787 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4524852753 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265564279106 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912082271956 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645701814982 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167945932882 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477761505613 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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