People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportations, while others think the government should be held accountable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many problems people and the government should be responsible for; one of theses issues is the pollution that is caused by transport and effects negatively on public. Some individuals think that they must hold the responsibility of this disaster, others believe the government should be.
Increasing in residents and the demand on cars, lead to pollution, that’s why some think that they are causing this problem. First, humans need to start using public transportations, to reduce traffic and reduce fuel emissions produced from their cars. People shall motivate and encourage each other to ride bikes in the cities, while they are going to work. Moreover, society must buy eco-friendly cars such as hybrid and electric cars, that help the circumstances to decrease. For example, in Amsterdam there is around 600 thousand bicycles, 90% of the citizens use it and less cost and expenses for them. In my opinion, I think that we should rely more on public transportations.
On the other hand, some people think that due to miss-leading and organization in their countries, the government should be held accountable. The administration must decrease the tariff on environmental cars, so people are encouraged to purchase it, that aid to reduce smog. New road infrastructure with modern public transport must be implemented, so the expenses on the rule will decrease and community won’t pay taxes for roads renovation. However, the government shall make awareness campaigns, showing what problems transportations is causing to our lives and what are the alternatives to use. For example, the Ministry of Environment of Lebanon, at the beginning of 2019 launched a program to remove all taxes and tariffs on electric and hybrid vehicles, to cheer residents to buy it and help their environment. From my side, we can’t put all the blame on the government, but it can assist by offering facilities, to start using alternative passages.
Finally, two views some think that people are responsible for polluting their cities, others believe it is the management fault. In my opinion, both the government and individuals need to take the responsibility on their own and work together to secure a healthy environment and start using another means of transports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29005524862 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08450248027 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538674033149 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1473391655 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363805251296 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117806384584 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112679112153 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243939658879 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105226796543 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.