It is often argued that if a person decides their career path in the early stage of their life, he or she will eventually lead a happier and satisfying life while others will work only to fulfill their daily needs and stay displeased with their lives. The following essay will explain the above argument in a detailed manner as I firmly concur with this kind of notion.
First of all, it is worth considering that every person during their early age motivated by their parents and tutors to have a particular aim in life. So that, one's mind will be focused to achieve it. As a result, an individual will lead a happiest lifestyle in future without any regrets. Whatever the grade they have read, they mainly concentrate on their goal. Indirectly, this helps them to collect information and take coaching related to that field. For instance, if a person wants to become a doctor, he or she will start preparing from the early age to achieve it by taking related coaching from the subject matter experts.
On the other hand, working professionals who are frequently changing their jobs due to not finding interesting work life eventually lead a stressful and unhappy lives. This only happens due to unplanned and unprepared mindsets from the early stages in their lives. For example, a science student if started preparing for government job exams which is only to secure a life with money will be unhappy because of not getting passionate and uninterested from their boring jobs. And, in future, they start moving towards depression, getting angry, becoming isolated from their social lives. In other words, such kind of people leads an unsatisfying future life.
To conclude, I completely agree on the above argument stated that every student should have a career plan to achieve a goal and to satisfy themselves in the future while working with their desired jobs which will make their career incline towards a successful and happiest person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51299961816 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0016881543 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219581435537 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071069840948 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753072599154 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142330966498 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379399469387 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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