If an individual acts in an anti-social way, such as committing a crime, then society is blamed for such behavior. What are the causes behind such behavior? Who should be responsible for this?
Over the past few years, society is held responsible for the uncivilized way in which some citizens behave. Lack of employment opportunities has been found to be one of the causes of such behaviors and government could be responsible for his unfriendly acts.
To commence with, scarcity of jobs could be one of the causes of illicit behaviors. This is because being out of a job makes a number of individuals frustrated, as a result, they engage in all sorts of illegal activities just to make a good amount of money. Such people could become criminals if they start involving in criminal activities. These activities include snatching a persons' belongings forcefully, fraudsters, hacking private information of people bank's accounts, drug dealers, and many more. All these activities may lead to a good amount of money which is required for such criminals to make their ends meet. For instance, the unemployed graduates in America have been found to be a major population of law offenders in the nation. Therefore, idleness in terms of unemployment is the main cause of unfriendly habits. Another cause could the reason for lack of education in a particular country, especially developing nations. According to the BBC survey, 40% of India's population is uneducated due to lack of resources, and with such effect, it is no doubt that the rise of illegal activities could be increased with the concern of lack of education among Indians.
On the other hand, the political leaders could be blamed for the mishap activities in the country. Most of them are self-centered, enriching themselves to the detriment of the masses. Consequently, their failure to cater to the general public has been found to be the genesis of this unfortunate situation. For example, the government of India is made of selfish leaders and their actions have produced an overwhelming number of youths who are making the country unsafe for others people to live in it.
To conclude, unemployment and lack of education could be seen as the factor of illicit acts, and the ruling authorities in the country could be blamed for this unpalatable experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atching a persons belongings forcefully, fraudsters, hacking private information ...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...equently, their failure to cater to the general public has been found to be the genesis of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07386363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93663716007 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4576983992 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265189424726 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820247046698 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601087454102 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172000168219 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643468226534 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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