In this up-to-date era people fascination for shopping increasing tremendously. In that case, several people asserted that shopping intention depend more on the age. Mainly, I agree with this idea but I also believe that it depend on mentality and situation. So, this essay will explain the topic on the base of it.
To begin with, nowadays young nations are doing shipping more than senior citizen. As a repercussion fashion homes and shopping mall are keeping, maintaining products more according to the choose of up-to-date generation because they are more habited to the shopping. For example, UAE well-known newspaper 'Gulf News' published that Dubai Mall 60%-70% customers are under the age of 18-25 years. Thus, shopping habit mostly depend on age. Moreover, modern generation live a busy, hestic and charming lifestyle with new technology. As a result now all over the world online shopping is increasing rapidly and their main target to attract the people 18-30 years. For instance, survey of USA 'Fashion Magazine' teenage people are doing shopping in online not only as habit but also it a hobby for them.
Nevertheless, there are numerous citizen their shopping habit only depend on mentality and situation. May be their not young or fashion coussious but they like to do shopping from outlet. Even, some like to do shopping in old age for making their like colourful. To highlight, in Bangladesh last year at 'Bashundara city' bumper shopping prize winner was a 65 years old lady. Therefore, shopping habit always not depend on age.
In conclusion, though most of the shopping lovers are young and teenager but according to the mind setup it depend on situation too. However, as a shopping help to develop a country business. We all should try to attend it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: citizens
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05460750853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62694452112 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9264448176 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4210526316 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30381504093 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100226637378 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079221521895 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174008311446 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602740666012 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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