A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. old-fashioned values such as honor, kindness, and thrust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion
In this materialistic world, people are in the rat race to gain more name and fame by any means which show their social status and wealth. However, the traditional values such as integrity and honesty are being forgotten. I accede that people are valued based on their wealth and status these days, but I also reckon that moral values still play the cardinal role in our societies.
Let us now throw some light on the first opinion of the judgment of people on the basis of their economic status. There is no denying the fact that people want to live a luxurious life because it gives them respect and high status in society. To illustrate, a man in a village who have an expensive car and a big house, always called in the meetings by the mighty persons. Apart from this, nowadays people have learned about the fact that life is very short, so they enjoy and live it to the fullest.
Let us now elaborate the second opinion of the importance of some social values such as honesty, kindness, helpful etcetera teaches the facts to live a better life. By doing this, people can also get a good status in the societies. For instance, a social worker of India, Mr, Anna Hazare is always known for his kind soul and politeness who serve for the welfare of people. Additionally, in industries, employers are still looking for the employees who are trustworthy, honest and hard working. From these points, it can be said that ethical values still play a cardinal part in the public sector.
In an epilogue, even though people are judged based on their money and social rank, but I do believe that old-fashioned values cannot be eliminated in our daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65646258503 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41453718527 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9743816655 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154899565737 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555522131612 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427522663251 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101471064059 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348235107342 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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