At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries, young people consist main portion of population. It has both its merits and demerits but from my perspective, its positive aspects undermine its negative sides.
In recent decades, urging families by donating money and putting more an emphasis to have more offspring have been becoming on the top of social obligations of governments. So, engendering has been more epidemic among communities. As a result, by passing years the proportion of young to aging people has been sharply increasing day in, day out.
An obvious argument in its favor is upholding the working forces. To dig a little deeper, when there is enough lively nature worker in a society, government does not need to import foreign workers and tolerate its related negative side effects likes risk of increasing impostors in community. Moreover, reinforcing the domestic working force will cause stablish of various local business and it finally make country more independent than before. China, a considerable example, is a country that have made a big break and get its foot in the door of industrial world by its young work forces and now is known as one the main pole of industrial world.
Besides, the finance which had been designated for remedying and looking after of elderly people will be less and could be invested in progression of country. These days, curing and taking care of aged people come at a huge cost. Governments would be invoiced less if the proportion of elderly community decreased. From my personal experience, after my grandmother’s demise, my father has allotted her curing expenses in building a charity organization.
In a conclusion, the number of aging people is falling behind by the number of youths in some societies. It seems to me that, this trend has brought various advantages for them such as improving interior workforces and also conveying the income which is costed for senile people to developing approaches for countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.128125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82732032751 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628125 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8239201647 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121573812377 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411272709003 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572743331559 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642195236183 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471429072912 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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