The amount of all ages of people on this globe is variable according to the time. In the mean time, youth of several nations are more as compared to the senior citizens. If pondered, positives of such a situation surpasses the demerits. Both the aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
Taking the brighter side into consideration, the principal benefit of youngster's majority is improvement in economical conditon of particular part of the world.By this I mean that they are the only people who is more productive and working employees to generate a handsome revenue for their government. The best example of this occasion is China, where according to one survey more than 60% of youngsters were available in 2015; hence, their GDP was improved significantly for a certain time period. Moreover, older people often spend their earned money for a reacreational purpose and spend their free time to the abroad destinations. This can not only decrease per capita incom, but also their forex spending would be found responsible for destructurction the financial condition of their native country.
Furthermore, Due to same age people mutual intemacy between the member of society may be improved and world become an interested place to live. Either ideas or lifestle of persons belongs to same generatio could be equal. As a result, like-minded age group can live a life without hinderence. Conflict between people will also decline due to surge in mutual understanding.
Despite this arguments, several downsides too. The most damaging is that vulnerable areas will suffer from the high experienced individuals. Several business and organisations are now running in the guideline of elderly CEO and Managements in developed countries. In contrast, this advancement is not posible in areas where such a valuable old people are absent.
In conclusion, nevertheless the cons such as society lack a moral and social support form the old age public, pros of havind physically and mentally fit people could be a financial stronger nation.
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 89
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this problem is affecting your wor 67
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 92
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 84
- The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...time, youth of several nations are more as compared to the senior citizens. If pon...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...onditon of particular part of the world.By this I mean that they are the only peop...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...surge in mutual understanding. Despite this arguments, several downsides too. The m...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun business seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several businesses'.
Suggestion: Several businesses
... from the high experienced individuals. Several business and organisations are now running in th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e could be a financial stronger nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, i mean, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25688073394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9424935974 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2948441916 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.117647059 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983901648935 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313818620701 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316578254754 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516010021883 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285811176816 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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