Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries.
What do you think are the reasons behind this?
Cricket, once introduced by the British people has become the most famous and followed sport. It is the most played sport in many countries. In my opinion, the main reason for the increase in the popularity of cricket is the financial attractiveness and inspiration for the youth from the great pioneers.
The amount of money cricketers earns from playing the sport and though advertisements and brand endorsements magnetises the youth to follow this sport. Having a sound financial health is a dream of every people as this will make their future secure and they will not only have a comfortable lifestyle but also will be able to purchase luxuries because of which they choose to build their career in this field. To elucidate, the famous batsman Virath Kohli, the wealthiest man earning money by playing cricket as well as by participating in promotion campaigns is a motivation for people to play cricket and become famous and rich like him.
Moreover, people always follow the path of their idols and aspiring players. The successful batsmen and bowlers become the popular icon for the young generation which converts them either into their fan or a prospective future player. To exemplify, Sachin Tendulkar is considered to be God of Cricket and many people are a die-hard fan of him as a result some have even become aspiring cricket player.
Furthermore, cricket is acclaimed worldwide because the amount of media attention cricket enjoys solely is not given to any other sport. There are many channels broadcasted on television such as Teen Sports and Star Sports that show live cricket though out the day. Thus increasing the popularity of this sport though out the nation.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that huge amount of money earned in this sport, inspiration received from the famous cricket players and media coverage are the major reasons for giving cricket worldwide recognition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10862619808 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6786617739 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4972939223 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185398301271 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820226604131 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389694560245 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115714427033 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305774032884 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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