Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries.
What do you think are the reasons behind this?
Cricket, once introduced by the British people has become the most famous and followed sport. It is the most played sport in many countries. In my opinion, the main reason for the increase in the popularity of cricket is the financial attractiveness and inspiration for the youth from the great pioneers.
The amount of money cricketers earns from playing the sport and though advertisements and brand endorsements magnetises the youth to follow this sport. Having a sound financial health is a dream of every people as this will make their future secure and they will not only have a comfortable lifestyle but also will be able to purchase luxuries because of which they choose to build their career in this field. To elucidate, the famous batsman Virath Kohli, the wealthiest man earning money by playing cricket as well as by participating in promotion campaigns is a motivation for people to play cricket and become famous and rich like him.
Moreover, people always follow the path of their idols and aspiring players. The successful batsmen and bowlers become the popular icon for the young generation which converts them either into their fan or a prospective future player. To exemplify, Sachin Tendulkar is considered to be God of Cricket and many people are a die-hard fan of him as a result some have even become aspiring cricket player.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that huge amount of money earned in this sport and the inspiration received from the famous cricket players are the major reasons for making cricket worldwide recognizable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06201550388 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71225898047 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5968552682 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158618018231 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761925601687 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369548410723 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109702818212 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299550748227 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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