Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Previous decades children would die because of infectious diseases, whose rate is plummted today. Nowadays, children are vaccinated, since that they are not prone to infectious diseases. Some conditions which would end to death are eradicated these years by vaccination. Others of which are controled and if a child suffers from that, she may be cured or at least less side effects may occur to her.
It is debated that wether parents should be made to immunize their kids against common conditions by law or they should be free to choose. Although forcing individuals is not accepted in a democratic society, I think we should concern our children health, who cannot decide themselves. kids are so weak and their immunity system is not improved as an adult, so that they should be protected by her aware parents. And if they are not complete enough to take care of their child, society should help the kid by obliging the parents to vaccinate the child. This rule may even conclude that people pay more attention to vaccination and know how much important it is.
At the end, vaccination has been so effective in disease severity reduction and conditions eradication. so that, to immune children, it is important to become sure that they are vaccinated, for which there should be a legislation to force parents to vaccinate their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96017699115 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67655229344 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62389380531 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3386974167 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.909090909 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185209344001 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693861243292 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796829578126 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120086810226 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623087842263 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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