Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
In this age of revolution and ever changing market dynamics, it is essential for one to equip himself with the latest trends and norms. This is the era where human dependability is getting minimum day by day due to e-commerce involvement. Entrepreneurs and looking around different ideas to move their businesses in a different direction to earn more with spending less in their existing businesses.
In order to catch up the speed of market, one must not only stick to the work he/she is doing on a daily base as this might result in ending up the job he is currently putting his efforts in. The only survival is to equip with the skills that are in demand in the market. If we look around, there were many jobs in the market which got obsolete like jobs of shorthand and typing etc. and are now replaced with enhanced technology. Same is the case with mostly government and private offices where people used to do all the work manually and huge bundles of files got piled up in a corner of buildings but now all that data can be stored in a small hard drive.
It is a known saying “do not put all your eggs in same basket” by Warren buffet where purpose of this advice is not to depend on a single source of earning as it might put us in an awkward situation. Need of the hour is to indulge yourself in multiple tasks at the same time by keeping an eye on the changes around us so we can adopt the change and save ourselves.
Learning is the key of success and learning cycle should only end when one leave this world. Once you stop learning new things, you might not be able to match the pace of world and this will affect you in all aspects of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cycle'
Suggestion: to cycle
...ning is the key of success and learning cycle should only end when one leave this wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34294871795 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36582538802 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6283484023 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878954298801 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306236410225 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181729790717 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501324378116 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111635209226 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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