Treating & preventing any health problems or diseases is much simpler and easier rather than curing them after they effect the human body. This essay explores the major reasons of why avoiding an illness is far more efficient than treating it after someone falls sick.
Firstly, the significant advantage of treating a potential illness before it becomes a threat is that the problem is being addressed at it’s roots itself. Once someone falls sick, the human body starts damaging and gradually multiple body functions get effected. In spite of treating the illness, it might take lot of time for the body to heal as it weakens the immune system of the body. For example, once diseases like common flu attack the body, even after treating it with scientific methods, it is highly likely for the person to lose resistance & sometimes effect the body permanently. In some cases, it can become a threat to the life itself. In addition to that many medicines being used these days to treat such illnesses have side effects which may effect other systems of the body. Instead getting vaccinated for flu is a simple yet effective way to avoid the struggle altogether.
Secondly, treating serious illnesses require high level expertise and technology which are sometimes too expensive and cannot be afforded by many people. In times when seasonal illnesses are common, it becomes increasingly tough when more number of patients have to be admitted into hospitals. Advanced health care is not readily accessible to many people particularly in developing countries like India and Bangladesh, where there are still millions of people living in remote areas where cannot access even a primary health care center. It is far better for governments to invest in developing technologies & device measures to prevent illnesses which can avoid loss of lives, even though it could be expensive.
To conclude, it is highly necessary to take steps in research and development of preventive measures rather than curing them after getting effected which can save lot of lives and resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'at its roots'?
Suggestion: at its roots
... is that the problem is being addressed at it’s roots itself. Once someone falls sick, the hu...
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Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...h illnesses have side effects which may effect other systems of the body. Instead gett...
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Line 2, column 793, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...h may effect other systems of the body. Instead getting vaccinated for flu is a simple ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in addition, in some cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14540059347 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6041223641 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584569732938 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8862507925 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208794192022 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670279226534 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711736132745 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136089888409 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435111293382 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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