PTE essay:
It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is not a wise decision of getting married before graduating from school or having a job. I completely agree with this opinion as I believe there are several drawbacks of these marriages.
On the one hand, people who are not finishing school are normally not mature, and therefore they are not ready for marriage. Marriage comes with huge responsibilities and ones need to fully prepare for all the challenges associated with it. Young people, who are still in school, are not mentally and emotionally fit to face such a difficulty of the relationship. For example, they need to completely change from their easy lifestyle to adapt to their new family life with rules and duties. This can be very hard and stressful for them, particularly when they have children. As a result, the divorce rate in young marriage couples is high.
On the other hand, there are many financial problems for the individuals who marry without having a secured job. The cost of living today is high and it is a huge problem for young couples living with low paid temporary or part-time jobs. It is extremely hard for them to support their household’s daily expenditure and this results in poor living quality. They, for example, cannot afford a good health care system, and advanced entertainment and sports facilities, and must live in small and remote flats. Life becomes very depression and frustration. Furthermore, they cannot dedicate their time to learning and improving their professional skills and, in today’s competitive job market, this consequently leads to a low job prospect which has negative impacts in their future.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with getting married before securing a job or finishing school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1149825784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85873160553 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1898826406 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160222083157 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623465221217 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105354732771 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171653719318 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135850457895 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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