By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing
murder. Therefore, life in prison Is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Taking life forcibly from another human being is, undoubtedly, a heinous crime. One who committed this offence, has no right to live among the society.
However, punishing every murderer with death sentence is also not advisable and can be left with prison sentence.
Firstly, murderers influenced by terrorism , extremism or radicalism. These murderers intend to kill maximum number of people and they think least about human suffering and consequences to the families that are affected. Society will have no guilty feeling to punish them with death penalty.
A recent incident in India backs this theory up. During attacks on Indian city Mumbai, police caught a terrorist who participated in the attack. However, government has delayed many years to hang him down. This brought lot of criticism on the system which delays the punishment.
It has been proven in this case that prison sentence is merely a punishment. These murderers,often with their influence, can get all the amenities to their prison room.
Secondly, there are murderers who commit the murder with an intention or motivation. The number of victims chosen by this type of criminals are often less in number .In order to execute the plan successfully they rehearse and visit the spot multiple times hence it is called preplanned murder, supreme punishment can be given to this type of criminals.
There are murders who commit the crime without any intention, this often happens by accident. Another murder type which falls into this category is one commits the crime to save others. These murders should not be dealt with highest punishment and can be left with prison sentence.
All in all, It is the nature of the murder that decides if a murderer can be punished with death penalty or not. Society won't feel guilty on cruel killings of innocent people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263473053892 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.167664670659 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059880239521 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538922155689 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0269461077844 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0988023952096 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0449101796407 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58451689815 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269461077844 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00299401197605 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.11377245509 0.0861772015684 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209580838323 0.021408717616 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0269461077844 0.011925033212 226% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1834.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09302325581 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378737541528 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269102990033 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182724252492 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119601328904 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58451689815 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.1615412512 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8421052632 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3806364219 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5263157895 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38877755511 182% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 42.7524042665 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.63855421687 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400295238908 0.332605444948 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0553625645818 0.102741220458 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0589697187097 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555425922328 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177585453193 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124130169391 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549307301507 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.137753370063 0.324371583561 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877716642681 0.0638462369009 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198566816757 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455458689459 0.058150111329 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.68436873747 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.9879759519 476% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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