By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Convicting the offender in the form of the death penalty is also a false activity done by the community and it makes them culprit. Thus life imprisonment is thought to be a good option for killers. In my opinion, strict rules are mandatory in society to mandate people to follow law and order. Killing the demons does not make you evil.
Firstly, harsh punishments are obligatory in society to give individuals directions for the right path to follow. We live in a social environment where different people have different aspects, some may follow or some does not wish to. Therefore, to control the attitude of every fellow citizen, it has become necessary for the judiciary to convict criminals with a tough sentence. For example, the Arab countries have harsh rules for every type of crime, hence their wrongdoing levels are very low and force them to obey the directions of police and army.
Secondly, every country has a limited number of prisons. If the government will keep securing them away from the social network, the expenditure will be very high and may exceed the budget including their safety and maintenance such as food, clothes and other facilities. Moreover, keeping them in jail is also not safe for a longer duration, which may raise the concern of security of law obedient fellows.
In conclusion, punishment in the form of a death penalty is harsh in the society for the criminals but it is a necessity for the control and make a way in the community. As well as keeping them in the prisons is no way beneficial and productive to the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...he community and it makes them culprit. Thus life imprisonment is thought to be a go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80442804428 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64324635056 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8964613089 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153179769747 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052163420478 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432225357327 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091289446412 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422122562623 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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