Que: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work, while some say children in these families benefits from additional income, others feel they lack support because of there parents absence.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, both mother and father prefer to work in order to fulfill their daily needs of lifestyle. It is often argued that this is beneficial to their children by fulfilling their needs of extra curriculum activities, whereas others think that their children not able to get proper training of life lessons, as their parents not available with them mostly time because of their work. This essay agrees that Additional income is beneficial to both parents and their children. This essay will discuss both views.
It is clear that due to advance education level, competition among the children increases rapidly day by day. As a result, perusing higher education with extra study activities is much costlier in comparison with past education, which is essential for rising toddler’s grasping power. It is therefore agreed that both elders need to work for giving their children wealthy professional career. For example, Forbes top 500 business men list of last decades shows clear view about mostly successful professional person had received complex education with extra curriculum activities in their childhood.
However, many disagree and think, especially older generation people, feels that young ones, whose parents working outside were not able to teach their special ones the important life skills such as brotherhood, respect for elders and other indeed values of lifestyle. Despite this, this qualities also could be learned from their grandparents and this essay disagrees the thinking of aged people about parents not to work. For instance, nowadays, Daily newspaper published an article about the children, who were trained and learned by their grandparents are good social person.
In conclusion, to give their children advanced education with other technological tools and make them aware of latest information sources, both mother and father should work. Nevertheless, Grandparents in the absence of parents can learn their grandchildren important values of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...deed values of lifestyle. Despite this, this qualities also could be learned from th...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...technological tools and make them aware of latest information sources, both mother and fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52597402597 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67440250151 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9778940748 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187728323714 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828631697325 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496640485088 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120473586548 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269815373943 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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