As there is an advancement in internet, nowadays, people buy goods through E-commerce and are given a chance to leave their reviews on the product they buy. In my opinion it is a good option since other people who wish to purchase the same product will be benefited by the opinion one leaves.
Buying products through online stores is a hectic task since one cannot judge the durability of the product by just merely looking at its images. It is in this point where reviews of the people who had already purchased the goods plays an indispensable role. For example, when one wants to buy a dress, the quality of the material and the price of it may not be reasonable and in such situation reviews on the particular dress will be found useful. Moreover, the description of the product such as color and size will at time not match and this can also be found out by the views posted by other customer and hence helping people for a hassle free online shopping.
On the other hand, opinions posted may be incorrect. There are some products which may get damaged during the shipping process. Take for example, a piece of glass dinning set have a higher chance of getting broke due to mishandling, and when this product reach to the customer, at times, they are lured to give a wrong statement about the quality of the product or about its packaging. This reflects on other customers who will eventually not purchase them and thus causing a loss to the supplier. But, such inappropriate views are only minimal which dose not create much of a hindrance in buying the product.
In conclusion, leaving comments and reviews of an item is a good option which has lead to hassle free online shopping.
Although, some damaging and incorrect views of the product persist, it is very minimal that does not create any obstacle in buying the item.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e benefited by the opinion one leaves. Buying products through online stores is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66769230769 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46214607885 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513846153846 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3991334726 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137782792115 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547448045788 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548439427708 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904973772035 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668906092517 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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