As technology develops everyday , few people have a tendency to purchase the updated version of their gadgets such as mobile, laptop , desktop extra. However, I believe that usage of such technologically advanced devices are beneficial for people who work on software but it will lead to damaging effect on teenagers.
For people who reply on software's such as Auto-cad, development in technology is a boon. This is why such people often ought to buy the newest of gadgets so that they can update themselves and many even have created revolutionary changes. For instances the recent version of Auto-cad has released 3D drawing of models which will only be supported by the newest version laptops. Hence , civil engineers and people who use Auto-cad buy the latest devices to enhance themselves and thus they give ingenious solution.
On the Other hand, teenagers nowadays buy devices that are unnecessary for them. Young adults do this just to show off among their peers. Take for example, Smart watch, which is o where related to their education is worn by many high school and university level students. In my opinion it is totally a wast of money , moreover such high end devices will also lead to adverse ramification in their academics because of the umpteen number of distraction in it.
In conclusion, though technologically progressed appliances are seen as a mandate material for working people, especially for those who work on the software side, it will certainly give a negative impact on secondary and tertiary level students who mostly use these gadgets just to flaunt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
As technology develops everyday , few people have a tendency to purchas...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
As technology develops everyday , few people have a tendency to purchase ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of their gadgets such as mobile, laptop , desktop extra. However, I believe that ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted by the newest version laptops. Hence , civil engineers and people who use Auto...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...my opinion it is totally a wast of money , moreover such high end devices will als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08846153846 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77090259136 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2100896026 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.272727273 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761111475191 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354986659098 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320869557839 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04407495429 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277123913444 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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