In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone.
What are the causes of this?
Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
UNDOUBTEDLY, THE DESIRE OF LIVING A SOLITARY LIFESTYLE IS INCREASING BECAUSE OF A HECTIC WORK SCHEDULE. ALTHOUGH THERE ARE MINIMAL MERITS OF SOLO LIVING FOR THE COMMUNITY SUCH AS INDEPENDENT AND MATURE INDIVIDUALS, I CONCUR THAT IT HAS MORE DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS ON HUMANITY AS A WHOLE.
THE POPULARITY OF SPENDING LIFE ALONE CAN BE ATTRIBUTED TO THE FACT THAT ALMOST EVERY PROFESSION IS OVERBURDENED. TO DECIPHER IT, EVERYONE WANTS TO PROVE IT'S WORTH AT JOB AND WANTS TO CLIMB THE SUCCESS LADDER AT THE EARLIEST, AND HENCE SPEND MAXIMUM TIME OF THEIR DAY WORKING. BECAUSE OF A LACK OF THE WORK-LIFE BALANCE, THEY HAVE NO TIME TO SPEND WITH THEIR NEAR AND DEAR ONES. CONSEQUENTLY, INSTEAD OF HAVING UNNECESSARY QUARRELS AND SEPARATION LATER; THE MASSES PREFER TO STAY ALONE. THE SECOND REASON, LINKED TO THE FIRST IS, TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCEMENTS. DUE TO THESE DEVELOPMENTS, PEOPLE NOW DO NOT FEEL ALONE EVEN IF THEY ARE IN ISOLATION. IN OTHER WORDS, AFTER THE INVENTION OF SOCIAL MEDIA APPLICATIONS LIKE FACEBOOK, INSTAGRAM AND SNAPCHAT, NOBODY FEEL VIRTUALLY ISOLATED, EVEN THOUGH THEY PHYSICALLY ARE. THESE ARE THE MAIN REASONS BEHIND THE DECISION OF MANY TO LIVE ALONE.
WHEREAS THERE ARE ADVANTAGES LIKE MORE MATURE AND SELF-DEPENDENT CITIZENS IN THE WORLD AS EVERYBODY LEARN TO LIVE ON THEIR OWN, THIS APPROACH HAS MAJOR NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON SOCIETY. THE PREDOMINANT ONE IS NO EMOTIONAL CONNECTION BETWEEN HUMANS. MEANS THIS WORLD WILL CONVERT INTO A PLACE WITH NO EMOTIONS, PEOPLE WILL USE EACH OTHER FOR THEIR OWN NEED BECAUSE WE LEARN LOVE AND CARE WHEN WE LIVE TOGETHER. MOREOVER, THIS SECLUDED CIVILIZATION WILL BE LESS PRODUCTIVE. TO EXPLAIN IT, WHILE LIVING SOLO, THE MASSES SPENT MOST OF THEIR TIME ON GADGETS. DUE TO WHICH THEIR SLEEP WILL DEPRIVE AND THEY WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO PERFORM BETTER IN ANY FIELD. IN ADDITION TO THIS, THEY WILL PHASE MENTAL ISSUES SUCH AS DEPRESSION AND ANXIETY BECAUSE THEY HAVE NO ONE TO TALK TO AND TAKE CARE OF THEM IN PHYSICAL FORM. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER A REPORT SUBMITTED BY 'WHO', 43% OF YOUTH IS FIGHTING WITH ONE OR ANOTHER KIND OF DEPRESSION BECAUSE THEY LIVE ALONE. ULTIMATELY, THESE DEPRESSED PEOPLE WILL CAUSE A DEPRESSED community, IN WHICH NOONE WANTS TO LIVE I GUESS.
TO RECAPITULATE, AFTER DISCUSSING THE REASONS BEHIND THE DECISION OF INDIVIDUALS TO LIVE ALONE, I RESTATE THAT THIS CHOICE OF MASSES WILL LEAD THE WORLD TOWARDS A DEAD END. AN AUTHOR HAS WELL SAID, ' TODAY YOUTH DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THE TRUE HAPPINESS , IT COMES WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS NOT WITH MONEY AND SECLUSION.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AUSE OF A HECTIC WORK SCHEDULE. ALTHOUGH THERE ARE MINIMAL MERITS OF SOLO LIVING ...
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Line 3, column 757, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'NOBODY' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: Feels
...ACEBOOK, INSTAGRAM AND SNAPCHAT, NOBODY FEEL VIRTUALLY ISOLATED, EVEN THOUGH THEY PH...
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Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...IR SLEEP WILL DEPRIVE AND THEY WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO PERFORM BETTER IN ANY FIELD. ...
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Line 5, column 850, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
... INSTANCE, AS PER A REPORT SUBMITTED BY WHO, 43% OF YOUTH IS FIGHTING WITH ONE OR A...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...RDS A DEAD END. AN AUTHOR HAS WELL SAID, TODAY YOUTH DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THE TRUE...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...H DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THE TRUE HAPPINESS , IT COMES WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS NOT WI...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i guess, in addition, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95316159251 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70677645723 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.221213703 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168806504623 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488538023784 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356084158426 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934316585036 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022710004169 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.