In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping
it is believe that today more large shopping centers established and many small local shop closed. In this essay I completely disagree rather than agree the main idea because more review need to know the real condition for some reason
The main disagree more large shopping centers established due to the economie's country in good condition and many investor from aboard country to invest in that country. This country have biggest of population number 3 in world , so many companies opened cash injection to develop the companies. A recently many various product consumer need. When economy's country in good condition, many large shopping established
however there have some point of agree of some the main idea firstly, some of small shop closed due to adjust to interest to interest of consumer secondly some of small shop sell their product through the media online and doesn't need a real place or special place to sell directly. For example clothes shop closed because they can sell their product through shopee, Instagram and any type online media. So that small shop not closed but they don't need place to sell their product directly and the change the way of selling product in media online
To sum up agree an disagree from where I stand. I believe the larger shop established due to economie's country in good condition an many small shop closed because they change the way to sell product and don't need a real place
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: believed
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun investor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many investors'.
Suggestion: many investors
...economies country in good condition and many investor from aboard country to invest in that c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shopping seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much large shopping', 'a good deal of large shopping'.
Suggestion: much large shopping; a good deal of large shopping
...hen economys country in good condition, many large shopping established however there have some ...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: however,
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to interest'.
Suggestion: to interest
...some of small shop closed due to adjust to interest to interest of consumer secondly some of small shop...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ir product through the media online and doesnt need a real place or special place to s...
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Suggestion: don't
... So that small shop not closed but they dont need place to sell their product direct...
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Suggestion: a
...duct in media online To sum up agree an disagree from where I stand. I believe ...
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...duct in media online To sum up agree an disagree from where I stand. I believe the large...
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Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...they change the way to sell product and dont need a real place
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90534979424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29525760452 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456790123457 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4955243968 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357311080581 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191817670754 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11354632029 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233875463566 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228125640903 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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