In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
shopping trends have changed in this modern era as most of the people prefer to shop from huge malls rather than from traditional shops owing to, decrease in the number of customers local shops are closing down. however, in my perspective this has more positive impact such as job opportunities for many people, pleasure for people and some negative impacts in loss of our culture.
To begin with, large complex have immense number of vaccancies and these job offers eventually solves the issue of umemployment which helps to develop our country. In addition, people would find everything under one roof such as cafes, cinemas and parks which reduce their time to travel each place and helps them to relax. Moreover, they could spend a lot of time with their families and friends beside shopping due to the facilities mentioned above.
On the other hand, local shops are at loss due to fewer customers. however, these shops are beneficial in each and every society as people who need fewer items or want urgent items rather use these shop as it is convinient and reduce the time for travelling. this traditional shops are more like a cultural aspect as they were present for many years. For instance when something is needed in urgent people always use traditional shops inorder to save their time and money from traveling.
To conclude, shopping complex are mostly choosed by people owing to their convinient and this provides employment to new generation helping in the improvement of the nation as well as the traditional shops are needed as to save time and money and is also a part of our culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88321167883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46207311804 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1003502616 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295496947624 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121898238555 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727300411675 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184987647891 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832016696643 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.