In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Due to the closure of many small local shops, shoppers have recently turned to large department stores and hypermarkets for shopping. I believe that this is an affirmative improvement because it offers a wider variety of products, the opportunity to experience how certain goods work, and the competitive pricing method.
Customers typically prefer to complete their shopping in one location rather than visiting multiple places to purchase everything on their shopping list to save time. This causes many purchasers to visit large shopping malls with many departments, such as grocery, dairy, meat, home appliances, and electronics. Also, in the case of electronics, you can try out the device and make sure that it is what you want. For example, when I decided to buy a laptop, after doing a lot of online research and figuring out the specific configuration and brand, I went to a shopping centre where I was able to work with the device and make my purchase along with other items on my list.
Furthermore, price is the most significant factor every shopper must consider before deciding where to go. The key functionality of shopping centres is that they gather many small retailers in one place where a price competition to attract people is formed, which customers can benefit from. A recent survey carried out by Walmart asking customers about its pricing policy and whether they will come back or not revealed that the percentage of buyers who are satisfied with their purchase and the possibility of visiting again is increasing due to low prices.
In conclusion, I think the increased number of shoppers visiting malls due to the closure of small local businesses is a positive development because of the lower cost and the variety of goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07560137457 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77813320667 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3764654975 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32112558564 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111514265857 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799342860478 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166420481328 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406125230135 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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