In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is a very well known fact that customers tend to go shopping for large shopping centers or malls rather than going to the small shops. Although there are few benefits on it, I believe that it is a negative development. This essay will discuss why large shopping centers give a negative way of development to the small shop owners.
Firstly, growing number of shopping malls around the country, will affect to the small shop directly. Small shop owners lose their jobs because of lack of sales for their shops. For an example customers like to visit to luxury shopping malls in order to buy their daily needs within a one place rather than going here and there. Since there are no range of products available in small shops, customers do not like to visit small shops. Due to this reason, small local shops eventually lose their revenues.
Secondly, customers will not get an opportunity to talk to each other when they do shopping in shopping complexes. For an instance, customers do not want to ask anything regarding products details or any other facts, since everything is displayed on the racks. Because of this reason people don’t talk to others for helping.
Furthermore, customer tend to buy unnecessary products while doing shopping without even thinking what they really want. Since each and everything is available on one place, customer has to spend more money on unwanted products. Hence, it is effected to the customer in negative way.
In conclusion, Large shopping malls has become a huge impact for small shop owners as well as customers. In my opinion, I believe that there are lot of negative impacts have occurred due to the shopping mall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89084507042 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49441699553 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9245908743 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435404139024 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154908042782 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841925102844 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247996740978 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887775383077 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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