You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Heshan,
I am writing this letter to express my interest about working on dialog head office which is located in Berilin, German in coming six months.
Let me explain in more details. As you are already aware of our new project plan which we have undertaken to our local office team, it is really important for me to work with foreign development team in order to get some experiences regarding their new tools and technologies. I am planning to stay with them at least 6 months with the intension of getting a proper knowledge transfer from foreign colleagues.
During my absence, I would like to handover all of my ongoing project works to our senior developer Mr.Ananda Rajakaruna. He promised me that he will take care of all the day to day work which will not cause any failures
It would be really grateful If you can grant me your permission in order to process this further.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours sincerely,
Rekha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ananda
...roject works to our senior developer Mr.Ananda Rajakaruna. He promised me that he will...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79761904762 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55880388546 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2552251213 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235855478283 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923392142095 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053169154918 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109231394451 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476841157552 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.