in recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has causes this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is obvious for people to see a significant number young genderation in cities who are ofences. This phenomenon causes many negative effect. What is the reason and whether or not we can find out some solutions to handle it. The causes and mesures are discussed further.
The main reason make this problem get worse is addictive substance such as drug, alcohol. It can easily be seen in entertainment places for youngers particularly illegal bars. They need money to puchase and consume it although they do not have jobs which make budget burden and force them to do criminal activities.
Besides, the education is another thing contributes to increasing amount of crimes. Our concern is money and ourself, parents are not concentrate on their children. Furthermore, goverment lacks of campaigns which can raise younger’s awareness besides traditional education too focus on theory. To illustrate, lesson for children from seven to eighteen years old is too heavy on knowledge with academic subjects: mathematics, physic, chemistry. They even do not know they break law since all they know is boring lesson and more strong game.
However, there are some solutions that we can do to prevent it. First, the goverment need to have strict policies for reducing illegal places or activities and ban all types of substances which contain heroin for under eighteen children. They also public the negative effects when youngers wrongdoing like being a prison, bad health and reputation. In addition, there is a difficulty for them to be employed when they repent. Second, children are the center objectives in comprehensive education which combines practice and theory. They must aware what should they do or not.
To sum up, young people is the future of the world who need to be cared and taught in order to be good individuals. We have to see clearly the reasons - education and addictive substance and take step for helping them by official laws or revolution in way children lean.
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- in recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has causes this What solutions can you suggest 84
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- In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has causes this What solutions can you suggest 84
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Suggestion: obvious to people
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Did you mean 'to focus'?
Suggestion: to focus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, another thing, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71720755573 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1772027664 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117308995375 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394019143553 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463200652767 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793782850554 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847347613345 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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