Newspapers and books are outdated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion?
There are an considerable amount of people in information technology period believing that newspapers and books are old-fashion. They trust it thank to some reasons although it is not completely accurate. In this essay, I will give my point of view to demonstrate.
The most important justification given is information technology. New modern world’s web can be mentioned as facebook, instagram, zalo, social media are attracting our attention by colorful image or short video. The fear of missing out gives human particularly younger genderation panic attack about being forgotten in their circle. To illustrate, time which younger spend for is much more than 60% according researches from experts. Therefore, they can not have enough time for traditional reading as newspapers or books. Additionally, all informations what we need in book or magazines also can be found easier and faster by internet. Under one second for google answers your question without difficulty but hours for looking it from a book.
However, this opinion give me a suspicious attitude caused by book’s intertest. It is apparent that books supply individuals the lesson about patient, logical thought and imagination much more than any types of social media. Having no images forces reader to brainstorm what are happening. Besides the information in book is checked before publication. People purchase suitable books more convenient taking advantage of the exact age provided in book.
On whole, advantages of new technology and others make believe that newspapers and books are outdated. On contrary, they also have so many benefits that we have to admit so that we can not replace books by any kind of electronic web.They will remain valid despite the change of time.
- in recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has causes this What solutions can you suggest 84
- In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has causes this What solutions can you suggest 84
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- 1 In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has causes this What solutions can you suggest 84
- Newspapers and books are outdated Why do some people believe this What is your opinion 78
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32014388489 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88720775753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669064748201 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.128772554 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228307491105 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067704580161 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604191483774 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13947547441 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570124712159 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.