A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
- describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
- summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
- say how you think the company should spend some money
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to provide my feedback and suggestion to the company to spend the amount to sponsor on local children’s sports team than in concerts.
Let me explain the current situation in more detail. Most of the population from our area are lacking literacy but their children had proved their cricket skills in local matches. We have noticed their potential talents on this sport, but they could not move ahead for big tournaments due to insufficient financial support. I guess this sponsorship might boost their skills to show their talents in state level matches. Organizing the two open-air concerts will be a great platform for these children where all national television will focus, additionally there might a chance of more sponsorship from private and government sectors.
According to the present scenario from our area, company should spend money in sports team. By this way team can buy sports kit, can hire better coach and fix the play ground for their daily practice.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
Sreenivasan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23295454545 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63038114323 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2672600741 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287381334529 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101152575648 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772907891639 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157628952256 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794885058965 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.