In recent times, a fraction of population thinks that aborting a baby should be banned and on the other hand some oppose the idea of abortion. As a human being, I believe, every individual should have a right to decide about their future to raise their children while others are of the opinion that female sex is inferior.
To state the fact, abortions are forced mainly in less developed countries where quite a few men and women are illiterate. They are of mindset that women should only give birth to male gender because of their misogynistic mindset and thinks that a man is superior. For example, In Pakistan, the hospitals have a policy that they cannot disclose the gender to anybody due to increase in abortions. However, I think not all people are less educated, for some of them abortion is really a need.
Everybody deserves freedom to make a choice if they want to bring a soul to the world. Due to technology, many unborn children are diagnosed with health issues such as Down syndrome, Spina Bifida and many others. Parents are given options to abort the pregnancy so they do not have to see their baby suffer. For instance, studies show that each year more than 800 babies are aborted due to spina bifida. I solely believe that this decision is very personal and should be made by parents who have to raise them afterwards.
In conclusion, besides forced abortion due to peer pressure in some places, this essay believes that final say should belong to biological parents and therefore given freedom to every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79400749064 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44732410571 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6295494912 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193547022242 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672172961466 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544745627937 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118335679561 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500001508623 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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