Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Bringing a life into this world is one of the most splendid experiences for a mother out of all. But the number of abortions cases have increased significantly and is a controversial topic which deserve debate. This essay will discuss why abortions should be made legal with strong controls in place, even though there are points contrary to it.
To begin, there are several reasons why people think abortions must be prohibited. First, it brings damaging influences on women's health which include both physical and mental issue. In addition, in some countries, people usually choose abortion because they give more value to male children which creates major social in-balance in sex ratio.
On the other hand, it should not be forgotten that there could be some practical reasons when abortion take place. Now a days number of young people involved in sexual intercourse has gone up, which results teenage pregnancies. In such scenarios, a girl is mentally and physical not prepared to delivered a baby. Additionally, the participation of women in corporate world has risen tremendously. And they do not mentally ready for baby because of her priorities towards career, leads to drop pregnancy. Few more scenarios like complicated health condition of girl, bad future planning, and some time threat to mother's life also results abortion.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the legal framework should be design in a way to support it. Therefore, I am of the opinion that abortions should be allowed legally with certain guardrails to ensure safety of the mother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to debate'
Suggestion: to debate
... is a controversial topic which deserve debate. This essay will discuss why abortions ...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...tical reasons when abortion take place. Now a days number of young people involved in sexu...
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Line 13, column 71, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'designed'?
Suggestion: designed
... say that the legal framework should be design in a way to support it. Therefore, I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16342412451 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74872361951 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4080889185 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284090159619 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858054454254 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785392796356 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168976191988 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418021486837 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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