A few businesses have a policy that their workers must wear uniform all the time. The advantages of this are that it shows equality amongst all and it looks professional. However, wearing a uniform can get boring for some people and it can be depressing.
One benefit of wearing a uniform is that it gives an ethical look overall which is the most important thing for a reputable firm. When all people wear the same outfit it shows their professionalism. For example, airlines like Emirates and Qatar Airways, always make their staff wear uniforms because it makes their airline look presentable and classy. Another advantage of wearing a uniform is that it shows equality. This is because some people cannot afford nice clothes while others flaunt their dressing sense and how privileged they are.
On the other hand, wearing a standard outfit everyday of your life can be boring. Because an individual cannot get to choose different options which can cause inefficiency towards their job. For instance, waiters at restaurants often quit because they get bored of their job. Moreover, the thought of wearing uniform every single day can take away one’s freedom of choice which can result in depression as uniforms are usually white which is a colour of dullness.
In conclusion, while wearing a uniform has advantages, such as it does not gives an individual a sense of inferiority complex and it makes their company more sophisticated look wise. It also has disadvantages like it dulls their attitude towards work and it also bounds them to wear the same outfit everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shows equality amongst all and it looks professional. However, wearing a uniform...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t important thing for a reputable firm. When all people wear the same outfit it show...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e other hand, wearing a standard outfit everyday of your life can be boring. Because an ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it everyday of your life can be boring. Because an individual cannot get to choose diff...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...restaurants often quit because they get bored of their job. Moreover, the thought of wea...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: give
...orm has advantages, such as it does not gives an individual a sense of inferiority co...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...orm has advantages, such as it does not gives an individual a sense of inferiority co...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lso bounds them to wear the same outfit everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03422053232 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65429198523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9719941308 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316060982834 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110209328458 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766227496348 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197853865842 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08878587551 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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