Recently, many people know a few of their neighbours. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
Man is a social animal, to live and survive in the society, one needs to be familiar with the people in their surroundings. In today's technological era, the humans have forgotten the importance of communicating and meeting people, like the family or the neighbours. In the past, the neighbours were considered a part of the family, you could rejoice and share all the happiness as well as the sad occasions. But, in the present era this trend has drastically changed and very few people are aware about the folks living next door.
There are various causes for this issue, yet the foremost important reason is the changing lifestyle. Nowadays, majority of the families are nuclear families where both the husband and the wife are working professionals, that hardly stays home. Due to this busy lifestyle, the people have started living in an isolation, unaware about their surroundings.
Additionally, with the advent of digitalization, for instance; Computers, I-pads, Playstation and Televisions, the individual’s preferences have changed. They prefer engaging with these digital equipment’s, rather conversing with the real humans.
To socialize and to know about our neighbours and the other people around, is the need of an hour. One of the solutions to this issue could be, having events and gatherings in the apartment during the time of festivals. This would provide public an opportunity to meet and greet each other, thus getting familiar with the individuals in their vicinity.
To conclude, in the current scenario as people are drifting away from each other, socializing and knowing one's neighbour, not only helps in expanding social circle of friends, but also in time of emergencies. An individual should try to not refrain from making connection with people next door and consider its significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31958762887 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04133612746 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1309800899 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150258136496 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531166053237 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408034018147 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813625829173 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038667849088 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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