You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss.In the letter, you should:tell him/her your decisionexplain the reason for your decision.

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You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss.

In the letter, you should:
tell him/her your decision
explain the reason for your decision.

Respected Sir,

Thank you for offering me a full-time position at the restaurant as a manager. I thoroughly enjoy working at the Lynfield outlet as the coworkers are very supportive and friendly. I really appreciate your kind gesture, but I apologize as I would not be able to work full time because of my prior commitments.

As you might be aware, I am running a Gujarati language course for my neighbors in the evening. Being in an English-speaking country, the children tend to forget their local language and culture. This is my bit that I am doing for the betterment of the community and its people. I hope you can understand my situation.

If I have to opt out of this course, I have to give a written notice of three months. If this sounds perfect, I am happy to join as a full-time employee from the month of October.

Would be waiting for you reply.

Yours sincerely,

Nisha

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...pologize as I would not be able to work full time because of my prior commitments. As ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68553459119 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87000641637 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4014265086 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7272727273 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245051291816 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887826471558 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657262104794 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118973106118 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506624658 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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