Schools play an integral part in the life of a student to be a successful person. But, in this contemporary era, it is often argued that the internet is enough to gather information and gain knowledge instead of going to a traditional school for learning. However, I profoundly believe that having a physical teacher could benefit a child as they can interact with them in person and clear the doubts. Secondly, a school is important for children because they come across many other students of their age which is important to their growth.
To start with, there is a vast difference between having a teacher to be discussed face to face and the information available online. To elaborate, a teacher can be reached at any time of the day in person at the school and a child can discuss his problems or doubts which could be explained in a simplified way by providing examples, whereas, the information available on the internet has no such facility, and thus leave a student without understanding the concept. For instance, more than half of the school going students in India when interviewed, opted to have a teacher because they can gain knowledge and improve better understanding.
Additionally, a school is a place where students not only express their performance under the guidance of a teacher but also make friends who could help them in learning. To elaborate, a child can learn quickly and also enhance themselves in many skills such as writing and speaking with their peers, if they are at school. Moreover, this would make a child be a co-operative, tolerant and sociable person which could be beneficial in the future. Furthermore, students can be well-educated only with the tutorial from their teachers and communication with their classmates.
To conclude, although the internet allows people to access it without any age limit, in my perspective going to a school not only makes a child understand the concepts better but also makes them a good citizen as they know how to behave socially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simplified way" with adverb for "simplified"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94985250737 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87524228762 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519174041298 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0402759265 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189565814277 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739022771009 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483438464426 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119708656091 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546083444351 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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