Scientists agree that people are harming their health by eating too much fat food. Some people think that the solution to this problem is to make people aware of the problems. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Obesity, which is caused by eating junk and fatty food, is increasing at the alarming rate in this century. It also causes other health issues such as diabetes and cholesterol also. We must do something otherwise this fast food generation will need to suffer all the consequences. In this essay, I am going to discuss about educating the people about situation and provide my opinion on the same.
In this information technology world, we can teach anything to the people. We can make educational social media video and make people aware of the possible results of eating fat food. People are thinking then educating this generation is the solution to this demon as it will give them prospective to the problem they might face if precautionary steps are not taken. For example, video showing how fatty food affects the body’s metabolism might help in reducing its intake.
On the other hand, there is already lot of information available online showing the effect of the fatty food and still this is becoming worse. For example, you will see the total calorie burger, French fries or pizza had in its menu but still people ignore it and order whatever they want to eat. There are a lot of website which gives all the details about the outcome of eating this food but still there is no decline on the issue. Furthermore, people are not taking education seriously.
From my opinion, education can show society the downfall for eating the fat food but it is not the solution to the problem. There should be some strict measures and routine follow up which forces people to not the fatty food is the only solution to this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...issues such as diabetes and cholesterol also. We must do something otherwise this fa...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun website seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of websites'.
Suggestion: a lot of websites
...er whatever they want to eat. There are a lot of website which gives all the details about the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78445229682 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45394085481 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.903771262 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367398085787 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123113950175 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783539010028 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226849024628 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447553994629 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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