Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion
Learning is part of life. Some people likes to learn online while others prefer traditional style of in person learning, For me , classroom style of education is the most efficient one. In this essay, I am going to discuss both the learning method.
First and foremost, online education is comfortable. This is because you can learn in your house with the flexibility of time. For example, there are lot of online recorded videos and you can listen to them whenever you have time and so you can do online class with tutor in the night also. It is very useful for someone with very busy schedule. Furthermore, it is cost effective also as no one has to pay any additional price for the real estate.so, because of the cost and flexibility many prefer online learning.
On the other hand, class room learning helps you to focus. This is because there is no other disturbance of your ambiance. For instance, you do not have internet or mike issues or any other obstacles because of which you may lose your concentration. On top of it, if you have any specific question then you can spend some more time with instructor after the call. For the someone who really wants to get the most benefit out of this process, classroom training is the best option.
In conclusion, learning is not bound to place and time but it depends on the situation people prefer different option. I have tried both the option and I have the most benefited with the classroom education as I can concentrate ore and that is why I choose the classroom learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63970588235 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54618016842 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7730216637 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160872165373 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579040945047 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041502353993 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112513391157 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378535720044 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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