Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?
Art and science are the two most important pillars of society. Some people have a thought that science professionals are respected more by the public when compared to the musician and artist. I firmly agree with the fact.
To begin with, artists and musicians have to strive a lot in their life, to earn an optimum livelihood. Only a handful of artists live a prosperous life. Additionally, this field does not guarantee employment opportunities. Despite spending numerous years in the same sector for polishing their skills, they need an additional source of income for a better lifestyle. Therefore, people do not like to opt for art or music as the main subjects as these subjects are known as recreational subjects only and allotted hardly one or two hours for relaxing purposes.
On the other hand, scientists and innovators always get respect from the public as they are the reason for the society we are living in. They always try to make the society free from hurdles, comfortable, and safe for living. Innovations by science like mobile phones which has made communication easy with near and dears, washing machines have made household jobs easy and many more. Apart from all this, there are always lots of opportunities for these students and have access to a better future with a handsome amount of salary for living life. The main reason for gratitude from people is, they provide safety at risking their own health, and the most recent example is COVID-19, scientists, and doctors are trying their best to find solutions for tackling this deadly disease even after coming in direct contact with the infected patients.
To conclude, musicians and artists are also important, but these disciplines do not guaranty a better future hence, people do not favor studying it. Scientists and technology specialists endanger their lives for society and invent new technology for making the earth a comfortable and safe place to live, hence get more respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'allotted'.
Suggestion: hardly allotted
...known as recreational subjects only and allotted hardly one or two hours for relaxing purposes....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04923076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64389169854 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2194926554 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122420892498 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477213156243 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461239890346 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978798960751 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612982094622 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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