Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion

It is no denying that technology equipment a more pivotal role for serval people in existing time. Therefore, scientists considering whether computers will become enough intelligent as human beings. Although, few masses of argued it will beneficial development, in contrary side unfavourable development in upcoming life. I will explain both views in the upcoming paragraph.

Commencing with the would-be enough salient helpful development of the human life. Owing to, in the modern era more alters in human lifestyle, since on this screen available social website instead of they easily talking with friends and relatives, who lived another nation. Moreover, it very rapidly helps in business work every day in the phenomenon as well as they are easily saving related business data in electronic equipment. Due to, they feel like relaxation. Ergo, it is fact that despite individual life look at more changes today time.

Another with converting that how it is a negative development for the upcoming generation life. Most masses believe that computer not only harmless, but also people will addict it. For example, it can be observed whether nowadays which bad impact on infants life, who more time spent on this computer screen and they are avoided too har hard work. In addition, they do not use their physical skill and more preference the technology equipment, therefore, it is clear that hazardous influence on future.

In conclusion, TV is making people mentally crippled land physically weaker in the guise of non-stop entertainment through hundreds of channels.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'infants'' or 'infant's'?
Suggestion: infants'; infant's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77266637917 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657258064516 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9796451063 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203261524101 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698659238092 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571082426141 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114349556408 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720972704207 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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