Scientists predict that in future cars will be driven by computers. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Future transportation will be computer driven as forecasted by technologists and scientists. This essay will elucidate the possible reasons behind the theory and also present factors for my viewpoint inclination toward optimism.
First of all, rate of technological advancement could be linked with this supposition. As with the current development in the field of robotics and artificial intelligence, one could easily imagine the above mentioned theory turning into reality. For instance, Tech-giants in field of motors such as Mercedes and Tesla have already engineered and manufactured self-driven cars which can sense traffic and predict best possible routes to destination. Secondly, driving might seem to be waste of time in future, as human are thriving toward utilizing time efficiently. A report by the U.S Department of Mass Transportation states that an average person consume one hour on driving on daily basis for the routine work; meaning that thirty two million man-hours are wasted daily on driving only in USA. This time could be utilized by the introduction of computer operated cars providing need for manufacturing.
In my view point this development is completely positive because of the reason of safety. As drunk driving, inability to understand traffic, traffic signals and laws would remain no issue and everyone will be able to reach the destination safely. For a better understanding, yearly half million people are reported to be died from road accidents globally.
In conclusion, engineering discoveries in this field and future time importance could be considered as possible factors accompanying scientists thinking on this matter while I consider it as beneficial considering safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'predict the best'.
Suggestion: predict the best
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59541984733 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11548592508 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.831103629 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305590530393 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106203733008 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747261692267 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18616740046 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465995053892 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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