In spite of the discovery and advice from professionals on the activities that are both beneficial and harmful to health, some human still engage in unhealthy habits. This is as a result of our life's pattern, however, there are ways that these activities can be effectively managed.
The consumption of some kinds of foods such as fast food, processed food and so on, may adversely impact on our health.
The ingestion of unhealthy meals and junks not only make us gain unnecessary eights but also adversely impact our health. Some people skip breakfast and settle for junks. Also, regular physical activities are good for improving the way we look, but this has been ignored by humans. Although our daily activities may be tedious, but , it is also advisable to make room for regular exercise which may help burn excess fat stored by our bodies. Not only will it help burn calorie, it will also help keep us fit.
However, some people with their knowledge of how beneficial it is to eat healthy and exercise regularly still look the other way.The most effective way to deal with this defect is to make it a deliberate effort individually to live healthy. Moreover, the health sector can organise workshops, seminar and even advertise on the need to lead a healthy and good lives. That way human will not only imbibe a good and healthy habit but will be better informed.
To conclude, although people can be ignorant of the advantage of leading a good and healthy life, they can also be better informed and educated on having a positive outlook and maintain proper eating habit.
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- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages What do you think about work life balance 74
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...our daily activities may be tedious, but , it is also advisable to make room for r...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...cise regularly still look the other way.The most effective way to deal with this de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51912940545 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7385453598 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16993906069 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687447250561 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377708228327 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895316313631 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042930871827 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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