Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be use instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Crime is a serious and growing problem is the most societies. While some people believe that the way to tackle this issue is that sending criminals to prison is not the effective and it instead of education and job training. I agree with statement.
There are a couple of main reason why the punishment crime in prison is becoming less effective. In prison, crime are punished as the method education wrongdoers, who are found guilty to improve self- awareness when they happen to law- breakers. However, if methods are not suit for crime , they tendency to be reluctant to take these punishments. For instance, a huge number of crime fled from prison and then they still comeback to the way of sin.
On the other hand, there are real benefits of method by education and job training for wrongdoers to live in normal life. This method will stimulate their ability and reingtergate their attitude to back in to society. In this case, a friendly environment will encourage crimes have good behaviour and impact on their life a long time. Secondly, when crime are educated lead to reducing the rate of crime committing. However, this policy may not have benefits on the convicts, who had committed a serious and unforgivable, thus serve a prison sentence right deserve their sin. These crimes are not capable of any treatment and scheme. Therefore, i suggest government should be planned with clear level of crime system to evaluate their crime.
In conclusion, i once again reaffirm my position that education and job training would reduce rate of crime but it depends on level crime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9138576779 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71651016737 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6571669437 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179520243487 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659111115115 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588167160598 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124366191038 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521993367139 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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