Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
Nowadays, shopping has become a favourite hobby among youngsters. This is mainly due to the availability of marketing platforms and globalisation.
Shopping as a hobby has become the latest trend among young people. One of the main reasons for this is the excessive use of marketing techniques. This means, companies are using advertisements to attract customers through various means like television, window displays and social media. For instance, the shops in malls use creative ways to decorate items or mannequins on display, which urge youngsters to purchase. Another example is the internet, through which brands flash their products on pop-up windows, on computer screens. Globalisation is another reason why shopping has become a time-pass among current generation. This means the availability of cheap transport has made it possible for products to be marketed easily. Hence, goods from any country can be ordered online.
Although shopping is fun, an excess can cause an addiction among youngsters, and drain their income. Instead, I feel that young people should be encouraged to do alternate activities in their free time. Rather than purchasing unnecessary items, their money can be used for other useful purposes such as learning to play an instrument, doing outdoor activities and going on vacations. By doing this, they get an opportunity to learn new things while having fun at the same time. For instance, a survey conducted by a vocational college showed that the majority of the students had saved money, to enroll for courses, by reducing their shopping expenses.
In conclusion, shopping has become a common hobby among young people because of excessive marketing by companies and globalisation. However, youngsters can be encouraged to try alternate hobbies, such as learning music and visiting places, so that they are exposed to new ideas and things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39322033898 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87439638068 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6887214786 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241581055393 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784245320847 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658291599681 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13818685849 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373189322588 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.